Anyway! I shifted the hues of the hook and the 'rope' attached to it from my last post because my focus seemed off. In the previous version, my eye was drawn to the rope more than the hook because of the color contrast. A blue hook against a green background versus an orange one on the same background? C'mon now. Color theory 101.
So I switched the warm color to the hook since I want the reader to follow that, while reading the sequence. Then I got into nitpicking colors again and contrast:
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| Version A |
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| Version B |
So it's probably not very recognizable, even with two versions right next to each other, but there is a slight nit-picky difference!
In version A, the lower left corner has a higher contrast between aisle and the floor under the chairs.
While contrast is nice since it brings out objects and focus, in my case I actually wanted the crowd to just be a monochromatic color so the background as a whole contrasted with Bombgirl. What the contrast in the floor did was bring unnecessary focus to that area and not to Bombgirl (more like her feet and the screaming dude's face on the corner). It also made a heavy line that cut that panel up that I didn't really need.
In version B, the colors are a little bit closer in contrast, so that area is a little more uniform, so my eye goes back to Bombgirl since she has the most contrast within that panel.
OR. I'm just crazy. The Neverending battle continues! Good morning and God Bless!
3 comments:
I love what you did with the people in the plane. I like how it turned out. Can't wait for it to be finished!
It is those minute changes that make a world of difference in the end. Keep at it, can't wait to see the whole thing together!
Oh, thanks for the support guys! I can't wait to see it all finished up too! I'll keep plugging away!
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