I had a couple friends of mine read through the second issue's test print and what came out was that the flashback sequence had a confusing read to it. They didn't understand who was having the flashback, or rather the read of it was confusing.
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| The old version |
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| Revised version |
The easy solution was to replace Bomb Girl's face on the 10th panel with the Kid's.
All the little changes I've wanted to do for this issue are done. There are some that I've just chosen to let go and just get this thing done and move onto issue 3. I still have to flatten the files and it's off to the printers! Good morning and the neverending battle continues!
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